Feedback/ Revisions

When I presented my project, my peers critiqued my presentation and gave me various helpful comments.  Based on feedback, one of the things I will be editing will be the title font on my cover. My peers also said the title was too basic so, I will change it to a more unique font.  Another thing I need to revise is my subheadings on the cover page.  I received comments from my peers that it was hard to see some of the words because of how the font was orange on an orange background.  I will also revise this font and make sure that it is easily able to be read.  For the table of  contents, I would like to revise the page and add more detail.  I would like to add detail by changing the background design and add more articles.  I'm going to change the background design because I understand that if I keep a colored background, it would cost more money to print.  I'm also gonna do the same thing with the pages of the article because I know that it would be a lot of money to print.  Another thing I would like to revise are the pictures in the article/magazine.  I would like to schedule another photo shoot, so that I could have more of a variety of pictures of Vincent in the magazine.

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